tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4908541648694116771.post1300754896088804428..comments2023-06-24T01:34:29.629-07:00Comments on astrosunilnomy: The Shayari Scratchpadastrosunilnomyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03766713953489677873noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4908541648694116771.post-90031898500814968892009-12-02T17:53:23.507-08:002009-12-02T17:53:23.507-08:00It's just a classic tale. Words reflect your o...It's just a classic tale. Words reflect your oratory skills also. At the start, i thought it is a film story, but not.<br />I want to add one more line here....<br />I am feeling, she should be very pretty, just because of the way, so nicely, she talked to you., if in reality, she is there, introduce me.arthalogybytheguruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11936964471089592769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4908541648694116771.post-36721084470060123462009-11-17T09:41:08.381-08:002009-11-17T09:41:08.381-08:00I felt u should have used the word "Samundar&...I felt u should have used the word "Samundar" instead of "samudra" in ur last shayari...<br /><br />aaj Shaam samudra ke teer par chalte chalte yeh khayal aaya....<br />samudra ke lehroon ke tarah, mann mein ashaein uth rahe hai<br />dil ke dhadkane tumse milne ke khushi mein tez ho rahe hai<br />yeh dil to pagal hai, jo samjhata he nahi<br />bas tere aane ke intezaar mein sapane sajata haiakknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4908541648694116771.post-32341045317812810912009-11-17T09:36:37.118-08:002009-11-17T09:36:37.118-08:00Nice Shayaris dude...keep them coming....Nice Shayaris dude...keep them coming....akknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4908541648694116771.post-47595651234529938182009-11-16T07:11:13.056-08:002009-11-16T07:11:13.056-08:00I think u should take up poetry seriously! ur good...I think u should take up poetry seriously! ur good!Amarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02665388705917353765noreply@blogger.com