Saturday, November 2, 2013

Guiding light

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 43; the forty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "LIGHT"
I am in your thought
I am in your breadth
I am in your every beat the heart takes

I am in your life
I am in your moments
I am in every page the destiny unfolds

I am in your smile
I am in your tear
I am with you here and always

Just like a shadow following you...
like a mystery surrounding you
let the magic of life sparkle as always
let the beauty of a forgotten moment
take your breath away as before

I may not be seen, heard or touched
but I will be there for you
you can feel me around,
when you need me the most and otherwise
till the end of this lifetime and the next

let my presence not go in vain,
coz I am there to guide you in every step you take
you need to move on in life
coz that's the way life is meant to be
to be grand in this moment and the next

I feel, could have told you
revealed how I felt about you
but waited for the time to be right
but destiny always plays its magic trick

We may be none
we may be someone
we may be a star shining up above the sky
we may be just a piece of glitter,
with a purpose to shine for now and forever.

let me be your comfort in pain
let me be the guiding light
let me be someone so close to your heart
for the body may not be one but our souls were never apart

I promised flowers
purple, pink and lavender
Oh I love you so much my dear
let me be bouquet of love at your doorstep
just for today
for tomorrow I'll return with more splendid colors of love my dear  

I can make out the tear on your cheek in the rain
Is there anything I can make to reduce the pain ?
coz all I have to say is making you feel more attached
life is sometimes about moving on and getting detached.

I hope you enjoy the future
as much as I loved being with you. 
remember the moment when we saw
all night long, the stars shine and shine
more intoxicating than the best wine

I am sorry for leaving you this way
I know you don't need my apology
but do take it anyway

Let your life be filled with more colors than ever
let your life be filled with more love than before
coz in the end perhaps what matter is only the moments
which made our lives so special together.


nothing is everlasting pain, fame or our name
but let me be clear
life is not something which has ends
It's something filled with moments 
which reveal I love you forever


Honestly speaking, this poem is inspired from movie P.S I love you. 
we see a movie, enjoy & learn so many things but foeget about it. later when we watch it after couple of years, we realize there are so many angles & perspectives which we really appreciate & there are handful of such wonderfully made movies. Some of my fav in romantic

Forrest Gump
P.S I love you
The Notebook
A walk to remember
A walk in the clouds
Gone with the wind
Once
Socha na tha
Last but not the least, the evergreen ones like DDLJ DTPH etc. 

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8 comments:

Sid said...

Could feel the pathos in the poem. Nice attempt !

Jini Fernandez said...

P.S. I love you...i've read the book but not seen the movie. People rave about the movie, but I tell u the book is equally interesting.
Nice attempt.

Akila G said...

Life moves on! Nicely done

the little princess said...

i was thinking about the same as i read through...P.S is inspiring no doubt! beautiful!!

cifar shayar said...

enjoyed reading it as I enjoyed watching movies

Ash Sharma said...

Beautiful poem. Good work

astrosunilnomy said...

@Sid, thanks glad you liked it

@ Jini, reading book takes up lot of time probably because i am not that fast a reader, so I rather watch movies, one of my friend reads the spoilers of movies to save more time !

@Akila, Yup life moves on no matter what happens, time heals all things, but i am of the opinion that some scars are left though the wounds are healed !

astrosunilnomy said...

@the little princess, thanks , when I first saw P.S I love you, I kind of thought why there is so much popularity for such a kind of sad movie where the hero dies in the starting of the movie itself, this seems contrary to the conventional Hindi movie style doesn't it. Love has to end in a way that they lived happily together ever after is the normal

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